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Thursday, 29 October 2009

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: VAST BEYOND MEASURE

 
In a vast desert
She saw happiness shimmering
Off in the far distance...
Persistence beyond measure
Guiding her without gesture!
©Belita
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15 comments:

  1. Cinabear Cinnamon29 October 2009 at 23:32

    The desert shimmers... Its lovely

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  2. dp ♥29 October 2009 at 23:43

    I love this but I especially love the last two lines...persistence almost always pays off! very upbeat write!

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  3. Clare M30 October 2009 at 00:00

    How lovely. Happiness shimmering.

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  4. Debby Rosenberg30 October 2009 at 00:36

    very special place for this one...inside the heart...loved it

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  5. raj rajaniemi30 October 2009 at 00:52

    Happiness is often hard to achieve no matter how close we are to it!

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  6. Debby Van Enkenvoort30 October 2009 at 01:13

    I like this, happiness can seem like a mirage at times, can't it?...but we keep pursuing it, anyway, and our persistence always achieves good results.


    a lovely write!

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  7. Jo B30 October 2009 at 01:26

    Hope she reaches that happiness! Like your imagery.

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  8. Pat Angloswiss30 October 2009 at 07:30

    The photo looks good together with the description

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  9. Nini Recio30 October 2009 at 07:49

    Nice message, Belita...there's always a shimmer of hope in the distance..

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  10. lee combs30 October 2009 at 11:28

    Love your poem...sweet!

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  11. Mindsnomad Yay30 October 2009 at 17:48

    Persistence pays well.. keep that happiness shimmering :)

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  12. Mysty Fairy~dragons30 October 2009 at 18:18

    hope is beyond all measure.. :)

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  13. Karen .31 October 2009 at 16:50

    This is lovely

    http://karenisme.multiply.com/journal/item/210/Creative_Challenge_76

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  14. Bill Pate31 October 2009 at 23:34

    Crisply written, and with so few lines to give us words of hope abounding; truely vast.

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  15. Groovy Grotto Rose's Place2 November 2009 at 16:46

    great word play and mix with the words, goodjob. ah the desert, it is soo cold this morning, I want some warm, smiles

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