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Tuesday, 24 July 2012

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: SALT

  
 
The sea swallows my tears,
The waves shout my pain,
As they crash for you.
Go and watch the tide,
Let the salt crunch
Like sugar glass
Beneath your feet,
And...
If your lips taste every single grain,
Feel them like tender kisses
Softly blown by me!
©Belita
 
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13 comments:

  1. EnglishLady EnglishLady24 July 2012 at 23:09


    Words full of emotion , beautifully written Belita hug x

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  2. dp ♥24 July 2012 at 23:12

    a very romantic and sweet poem...the photo fits perfectly

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  3. * mo {monica} *24 July 2012 at 23:18

    well paired, lovely verse and photo!

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  4. Mop top24 July 2012 at 23:24

    Very beautiful. It was a privilege to read this.

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  5. Mitchy LR25 July 2012 at 00:33

    Very nicely written!!!

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  6. tee skor25 July 2012 at 01:33

    I like this, excellent poem

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  7. Tim Culey25 July 2012 at 01:41

    Sea, waves, tide ... it is amazing how many contributors this week went in that direction from the prompt salt!

    This is a wonderful poem!

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  8. Frank Mann25 July 2012 at 02:10

    Very relaxing read.

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  9. Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect25 July 2012 at 02:25

    Tenderly sweet...could very well have gone bitter as salt is known to be when overused
    your photo and lovely words are beautifully paired up

    http://ladycallie.multiply.com/journal/item/3444/Creative-Challenge-214-And-So-it-Was-Spilled-The-Salts-of-Oneness-

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  10. Jacob Ladder25 July 2012 at 13:24

    nice write!

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  11. Sharon Kitley25 July 2012 at 15:17

    This is beautiful.

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  12. Mangus Khan28 July 2012 at 04:08

    Beautiful

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  13. Mindsnomad Yay28 July 2012 at 21:47

    Love the sweetness in the words...soothing read.:)
    http://mindsnomad.multiply.com/journal/item/543/Creative-Challenge-214

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