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Saturday, 24 October 2009

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: DARKNESS FOLLOWS


She descended into the darkness
In order to see the desirable light,
She walked in the darkness
In order to see a beacon of hope,
She stepped into the darkness
Of the unknown in search of lucidity,
And, suddenly, she found herself wrapped
In a silent and transparent darkness,
Ready to guide her to a new itinerary,
Full of light… free from jeopardy!
©Belita

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11 comments:

  1. The ending was worth the peril of the endeavour!

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  2. Ya' know, you made a great point, B. Sometimes we have to go into the darkness to come out on the other side.

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  3. isn't that the way it is...a well expressed poem! Brava!

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  4. Belita, I like this photo very much.
    There is light at the end of the dark street.

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  5. Transparent darkness...love that.

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  6. It really does go in that direction sometimes. Interesting photo

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  7. The picture fits your words so well. I could feel the darkness all around me and I kept on holding on to the little glimmer of light in the distance. That was wonderfully written.

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  8. as they also say....it is always darkest before dawn

    where there is light there is hope

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  9. Profound thoughts, Belita...one has to see darkness in order to appreciate and see Light...

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  10. Sometimes a chance has to be taken in order to make progress. This is really well written and I enjoyed it verymuch.
    http://shadowlight1.multiply.com/journal/item/52/Creative_Challenge_75_Darkness_FollowsWC_1334

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