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Tuesday, 31 May 2011

CREATIVE CHALLENGE: BITTER, SWEET OR EVEN BITTERSWEET

As the wind was blowing,

Sweetly and serene,

It caressed her softly,

Awakening sentiments

That on a feeble flight

Touched the ground.

The depth of her soul

Turned golden bronze

With red highlights

Bearing dried fruits,

Semi-sweet, bitter-sweet.

The autumn of her life

Had arrived at her door!

©Belita

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17 comments:

  1. tee skor31 May 2011 at 22:03

    lovely write, descriptive.

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  2. Cinabear Cinnamon31 May 2011 at 22:06

    Lovely :)

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  3. Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect31 May 2011 at 22:10

    woweeeee, belita...love this....and I think I can remember that season of my life...dunno for sure....seems eons ago...LOL. This is great..what an enjoyable write ( i do think when we read something we can relate too, it touches us . )

    I think you're on my page now....LOL !!! so, thanks for visiting!

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  4. Virginia ~31 May 2011 at 22:22

    This is lovely, Belita. Indeed, a certain stage of life is quite bittersweet.

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  5. Cal Jennings31 May 2011 at 22:23

    Very nice.

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  6. EnglishLady EnglishLady31 May 2011 at 22:42

    Those fruits of age ... the Autumn of our life ... the fruitfulness and the fulfillment... beautiful indeed Loved this poem Belita thankyou xx

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  7. Juliana *31 May 2011 at 23:02

    Those fruits are badges to me. "Feeble flight" I like that immensely. Very nice Belita

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  8. dp ♥1 June 2011 at 00:51

    very nice

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  9. Jacob Ladder1 June 2011 at 01:56

    love these words! great photo and poem!

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  10. Debby Van Enkenvoort1 June 2011 at 04:31

    Belita, this is WONDERFUL!

    Creative Challenge # 155 ~ Bittersweet

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  11. Barbara West1 June 2011 at 11:01

    Very Nice Poem and very descriptive--Barb

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  12. Baz H1 June 2011 at 14:22

    Very cool;)
    http://oceankinguk2003.multiply.com/journal/item/2164?mark_read=oceankinguk2003:journal:2164&replies_read=11

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  13. ~~ Amalie ~~1 June 2011 at 15:12

    just fantastic, words & image~~

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  14. Lyn C1 June 2011 at 17:01

    very nice.

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  15. Shers Gallagher1 June 2011 at 19:07

    Ahhh.... And so be it. :)

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  16. Sophie H1 June 2011 at 23:22

    Come what may, let it be...bitter or sweet.

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  17. Debby Rosenberg2 June 2011 at 02:17

    i kinda like the autumn years - it's the winter that chills me :) lovely expression, beautiful details

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